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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course.However,without the assistance of a teacher,students often find it difficult to manage their studies 250 words

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As we all know a
students
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student
 without teachers and additional learning support they will find
difficulty
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difficult
 to manage study in their own time of self-study.I totally agree
in
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with
 my point of view not all students can work
indpendent
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independently
independent
 in their own time if they cannot cope with the method while they studying.
For example
, if a student
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has
 a
probelm
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
 of extend has vocabulary and repeating the same words
,
Accept space
,
he should get assistance to help him to check the work if does make sense or not. Some students need
addition
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added
 support to learn from their mistakes and what can be
improve
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improved
 and what find out your weaknesses and your
strenghts
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strengths
. As I know not all students
good
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well
better
at
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in
 each subject.So they need to attend courses to improve the way of learning and learning not rely self-
indpendent
free from external control and constraint
independent
independents
 and students need self-study and extra lessons or one to one study.
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