Task 2 In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours? Write at least 250 words.

In the past, there was a close relationship with their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
meet together or go to each other is a house or invite each other
to
Suggestion
in
a restaurant. Nowadays people feel they are isolated with their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
because each person has their own independent lifestyle. People do not talk much with
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
because there now social media they can text or call their
neighbors but
Accept comma addition
neighbours, but
neighbours but
not to meet up and social media have
affect
Suggestion
affected
all of that even to have
close relationship
Suggestion
a close relationship
with their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
as they did in the past.
Firstly
, each person cares about his own lifestyle not care about how to improve has
social life
Suggestion
a social life
with talking with
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. There are a number of reasons for people do not have
such
a close relationship with their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
because less contact with each other, all of them using mobile not face-to-face communication,
secondly
, each
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
live in
different area
Suggestion
different areas
a different area
.
Thirdly
lifestyle is watching television in their own time or using a computer and using Facebook to make connect with their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. To improve to chat with
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
the best idea is the local communities should meet with all neighbours and talk make a cup of tea to be more
socialize meet
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socialize, meet
every two days in
week
Suggestion
the week
a week
to talk about themselves and introduce themselves just to come out of self- isolated. (217 words)

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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