Question- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Having complimentary museums
besides
other museums that are charged per each
visit
are essential in any country. While
costless museums
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castles, museums
castles museums
are extremely important for the public
education but
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education, but
also
museums that have different fees schemes are still crucial to support
economy
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economy's
strength.
This
essay supports free of
charges
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charge
tickets for local
residents especially
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residents, especially
children and greater value for non-citizens and other nationalities.
Although
most if
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most, if
not all of
museums
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the museums
are charged with enormous amount of
money but
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money, but
keeping some of them free of charge is critical for public education. Most of the citizens in my country cannot afford to pay for extra charges to
visit
historical museums neither scientific
ones
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one
. So, Most of them should be free of charge in order to educate the vast publication and encourage students and governmental schools to hold regular visits to them. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is inevitable to keep our museums
costless
a large and stately mansion
castles
.
On the other hand
, some people
supports
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support
that
public
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the public
should be charged
on
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for
each
visit
to any museum. Because one of the advantages is to support
country’s economics
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the country’s economy
country’s economy
. Not only should people pay
regular amount
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a regular amount
of money to
enter but
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enter, but
also
non-citizens and other nationalities should be charged reasonable pay for their
visit
which is doable. In conclusion, the advantages of
costless museums
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castles, museums
castles museums
outweighs the disadvantages. Having a well-educated citizens and generations is better than short revenues.
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