The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the number of male, female and total employees and factories in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901. During these 50 years, male and female labour in factories decreased: at the beginning, a large number of men worked in factories compared to women. Both
trends declined
Accept comma addition
trends, declined
showing a final rate to about 30.000: while men diminution showed fluctuation,
women
Suggestion
women's
employment gradually declined. According
with
Suggestion
to
gender trends, total employment
felt
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
down throughout the given period; from 1851 to 1861, there was a dramatic decline of about 100.000
employers
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
while from 1871 it decreased gradually with an
end-point
a place where something ends or is complete
endpoint
rate of 61.000. In conclusion, opposite to employment trend,
the number
Suggestion
the amount
of factories increase over the 50-year period from 225 to 600. An instability growth is illustrated with
plateau
Suggestion
a plateau
in the
first
ten-year and a significant increase in the
last
period
although
a fluctuation during 1871 to 1881.

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