Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I think the prices of fuels has
increasing
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increased
in
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at
the present time because of the
evironment it
Accept comma addition
environment, it
environment it
has
great impact
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a great impact
of
fuel
resources. Most people use nowadays cars which bad for the
evironment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
obviosuly
unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')
obviously
engine
cut
Suggestion
cuts
engine cut pollution. In my own view
.
Accept space
.
I totally agree in order to reduce the world
fuel
consumption is decrease the world's
fuel
resources. People do not care about the environment and as long as people using cars
,
Accept space
,
people do not care if the
fuel
has increase or less. In the supermarket they charge the per bag you would have to pay 5p because the environment and
also
majorty of people using cars now rather than bicycles or walking or catching bus and catching train they use cars becuase it is easier, comfortable
this
are the adavatage of using cars,
however
the disadvantage are higher cost of
fuel
in your cars and
also
pollute the environemnt

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