Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although
attending universities
is
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are
popular, it is thought that more people should be trained in manual work to meet social needs. To me, I only agree with
this
idea to some extent. On the one hand, there is not a shadow of a doubt that
student
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students
the student
can derive a host of benefits from universities.
Firstly
, the school curriculum is carefully designed to equip students with the essential knowledge and in-depth theories which is fundamental to the practical working environment.
Secondly
, attending a prestigious educational institution can enlighten the personal background as well as help candidates easily apply for well-paid jobs and
also
secure their career prospects.
Furthermore
, not only the academic and theoretical knowledge but
also
extracurricular activities
are
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is
the crucial factors to build students' success. As can be seen, those who take part in after-school activities are inclined to be more creative and self-motivated which make them feel confident after graduating.
On the other hand
, some arguments lend support to the view that vocational training is a better opinion.
Firstly
, training programs for the skilled trades regularly take half the time or less when compared to a four-year degree, which allows students to cut down their study expenses and enter the workforce sooner.
Secondly
, most communities require skilled
professions
a person engaged in one of the learned professions
professionals
such
as tradesmen, plumbers or sanitation workers
to guarantee
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guarantee
safety and provide citizens with convenient lives;
therefore
, manual
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
should be respected and highly appreciate.
Finally
, more people should pursue vocational training to sustain life because of the current imbalanced workforce resulted from surplus white-collar workers. In conclusion,
although
I recognize that vocational training is less time-consuming, I would argue that universities make students more well-rounded after leaving school.

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