Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

The technology of intelligent machines improves amazingly with the help of artificial intelligence. Robots, known as steel-collar workers, are widely employed in different aspects,
such
as marine research, space exploration and some modern assembly lines. Robots bring about advantages undoubtedly, and meanwhile, they are not as versatile as expected. The advantages of robots are innumerable. The employment of robots on assembly lines saves a lot of
labor forces
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the labour force
labour forces
labour force
labor force
. Robots are widely used in developed countries. In Japan, one out of ten thousand workers are robots, which not only improve the working efficiency, but
also
enhance accuracy.
That is
the reason why robots are so popular in
automobile industry
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the automobile industry
and electronic production line. Another merit is that robots can take the place of human beings and
work
in the dangerous environment or the places not accessible for us. Human beings have extended their cognition to the outer space, where there are considerable unpredictable dangers. Robots can
work
in any kind of situation, no matter how awful the environment is. In hospital, robots
work
as professional doctors
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
operation on the patients.
Furthermore
, robots can
work
around the clock, never knowing what tiredness is.
However
, the disadvantages of robots are undeniable.
Firstly
, all the robots and other intelligent machines are designed by human beings. What robots do is follow the instruction and pre-set programming by human beings. If there is something wrong with the electric circuit or programs, robots will become good-for-nothing machines.
Besides
, robots cannot
work
creatively when confronted with
complicated situation
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complicated situations
a complicated situation
. In short, robots are subsidiary to human beings.
However
competent they are in various kinds of field, robots will never take the place of human beings and play a decisive role in our
work
and life.
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