Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sports bring many benefits to our
life
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lives
as we know,
particular
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particularly
when we stress or
ill
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illness
illnesses
, it supports to improve our
health
and mind. In modern life, more convenient technologies were created go along with many categories of
sport
appear
such
as gym, basketball, or badminton etc. It is hard to say play
sport
in
team
and in individual which one has more advantage than another because we can take benefit from
sport
up to our demand and ability. On the one hand, take part in
team
sport
assistant people develop work in pair skills and the relationship with their partners. For instant, football player
need
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needs
to aware of their partners when is necessary to pass and the time they need to shoot with supports from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
player in
team
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the team
. If people want to practice their ability in teamwork as well as solidarity, sports which are played in teams are the perfect choice. It is not only improves our
health but
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health, but
also
connect people together.
On the other hand
, after work and study hard, individual sports like swimming, tennis help people get better in body and mind. As far as we know, the more we play those sports the more
we
of or belonging to us
our
strong
Suggestion
strongest
and avoid the influence of sickness.
For example
, swimming is one of the best personal sports that bring profit to our
health
and maybe develop the height of people. To summarize, both
team
and individual sports have own benefit to
human
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humanity
. Depend on facility that we can choose any
sport
that fit to
us
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
or learn many different
kind
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kinds
of
sport
to improve
health
and other skills.

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