Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
It can be seen that, the
diffrences
in dieting and living habits between the past the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
differences
nad
nowadays have changed. Therefor, today's people should been had a solution so that they can burn calories. in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
Also
, one of the problems that they do not know how to keep fit right.
Firstly
, we should consider people's living habits in the past. It is obvious that they seemed more healthier
than now because we did not have Suggestion
healthier
technology
or variety Suggestion
the technology
in
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of
food
at that time
. Also almost
the citizens of the world in the past spent more Accept comma addition
Also, almost
time
activities outside such
as playing sports or doing exercises. Fortunately, they were not busy for working and they often kept thier
mind complete peace.
As for now, people work out less than before because they waste of them or themselves
their
time
focusing on technology such
as playing video games or watching TV too much. The most important that appearance of fast food
is making they get obese. This
is reason
why they choose fast Suggestion
the reason
a reason
food
than cook a meal by thierself
because they do not have enough of or concerning this or that
thereof
time
to cook. In addition
, stress is one of the cause make them get fat. For example
, the amount of fast food
in US was consumed is the highest in the world, the consequence of eating fast food
makes Americans can not
keep fit than others
To sum up, there are so many can not
cannot
way
to get into shape. If we want to burn up a lot of calories, we should try to do exercises and keep well balance diet or change some daily actives. Suggestion
ways
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