Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

It can be seen that, the
diffrences
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
differences
in dieting and living habits between the past
nad
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
nowadays have changed. Therefor, today's people should been had a solution so that they can burn calories.
Also
, one of the problems that they do not know how to keep fit right.
Firstly
, we should consider people's living habits in the past. It is obvious that they seemed
more healthier
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healthier
than now because we did not have
technology
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the technology
or variety
in
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of
food
at that
time
.
Also almost
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Also, almost
the citizens of the world in the past spent more
time
activities outside
such
as playing sports or doing exercises. Fortunately, they were not busy for working and they often kept
thier
of them or themselves
their
mind complete peace. As for now, people work out less than before because they waste
time
focusing on technology
such
as playing video games or watching TV too much. The most important that appearance of fast
food
is making they get obese.
This
is
reason
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the reason
a reason
why they choose fast
food
than cook a meal by
thierself
of or concerning this or that
thereof
because they do not have enough
time
to cook.
In addition
, stress is one of the cause make them get fat.
For example
, the amount of fast
food
in US was consumed is the highest in the world, the consequence of eating fast
food
makes Americans
can not
can not
cannot
keep fit than others To sum up, there are so many
way
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ways
to get into shape. If we want to burn up a lot of calories, we should try to do exercises and keep well balance diet or change some daily actives.

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