Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computers. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that via computers, people can access to the

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of historical items and artefacts, museums and

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exhibitions are of little importance in these years. While

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accept that people can use computers to view those items,

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would say that museums and

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galleries are

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pivotal and should continue

be

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being

valued. It is understandable as to why people can obtain

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about historical samples and work of

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on computers

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Accept space

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rather than visit the museums and

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galleries.

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,

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practice which enables people to search for an object

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by

just typing a few characters, saves people a large amount of time. Rather than travelling and spending nearly a day on museums and

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exhibits, they can access any

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from their bedrooms at any time that they want.

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, with the advent of scanning technology available on the Internet, people can see more details of a historical item or an

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work.

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learners,

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, can zoom either in or out an image to view patterns of a piece of painting is even difficult for

naked eye

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the naked eye

to see.

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,

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would argue that the value of public museums and

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galleries should not be underestimated. Visiting some places like museums and

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exhibits can provide people with hands-on experiences. While people can feel an artefact on a screen from only one sense

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vision

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the vision

, at an actual place, they are inclined to employ more other their senses like touch.

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, museums and galleries

containning

include or contain; have as a component

containing

reliable sources of

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tend to be maintained by a group of experts, who recognizes whether the objects are historically important. Contrary to these places, Computer-based

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are often obtained

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is often obtained

and collected by

odinary

not exceptional in any way especially in quality or ability or size or degree

ordinary

people, which might be unreliable. In conclusion, it seems to me that online presentations can offer

convienent way

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a convenient way

convenient way

for people to obtain

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on

historical

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history

or

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works, but it cannot replace the exhibition halls and

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galleries.