Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environment responsibility While others believe that tourists should not accept any responsiblity at all.To what Extend do you agree or disagree.

People from other places who came to Explore the tourist places has social obligation.I completely agree with the above statement.
Besides
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sightseeing
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adventuring or whatever way
there
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they're
being thrilled
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they have to look after their Surroundings.I will outline in the essay
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the major threats possessed by them to the environment. It is a common practise for the visitors to throw garbage. Whenever they go around an area they would carry the usual food stuffs.
Although
there are many waste dumping buckets
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yet they
drops
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drop
in the area convenient for them.These waste gets
accumalated
periodically accumulated over time
accumulated
accumulate
and it degrades the ambience of
place
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the place
a place
.
For instance
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india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
well known
ganga
an association of criminals
gangs
Ganga
river had been
tourist
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Tourist
spot earlier
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but now the individuals cannot approach the area due to water pollution.
Secondly
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the buzz made by them is annoying to the
nearby
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Nearby
communities.The tourists may not even consider the place regardless they may sing or roar aloud
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consequenty
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
consequently
The inhabitants sleep might gets interrupted.To illustrate In a
camp fire
a small outdoor fire for warmth or cooking (as at a camp)
campfire
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they have no control of their senses
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extremely
jovious
at that moment. To sum up
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tourists should be conscious of their acts.If it is harmful to the society and
environment
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the environment
they must refrain from it.Tourists aim should be not only visit the places
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but
also
maintain the ambience of it.
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