Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Other, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People think that going to single-sex
school
exerts a positive impact on
education
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the education
of students. Meanwhile, mixed
school
is believed to bring more advantages for boys and girls. Personally, I support the later opinion and justifications are as follows. On the one hand, some
educationalists
think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in separate schools have their own justifications.
Firstly
, they believe
this
environment reduces distractions and encourages pupils to concentrate on their
study
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studies
. The most common factor that have a negative impact on studying is love in the early age. When teenage boys and girls fall in love with each other, they hardly have the ability to control their feelings and their
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Thus they
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Thus, they
may waste time on thinking about their lovers, missing their girlfriends or boyfriends,
instead
of doing homework or working hard for the exams.
Secondly
, single-sex
school
allows more equality among pupils and gives more opportunity to all those at the
school
to choose subjects more freely without gender prejudice.
For example
, a much higher proportion of girls studying science subjects
such
as math,
physical
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physics
, chemistry which are considered as
male’s field
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a male’s field
in
girl’s
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girls’
schools than their counterparts in mixed schools do.
Likewise
, boys in single-schools have more chances to attend in cookery classes and to study languages, which are often thoughts as traditional subjects for girls.
On the other hand
, I believe that parents should send their children to mixed schools because it would be a big help for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together from an early age and know how to interact with
opposite sex
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the opposite sex
. Studying in a single gender environment for the whole of
school
time, children may be shy and embarrassed in their relationships in the future.
In addition
Registering for mixed
school
means they have chance to meeting more kinds of people, which teaching them useful communicate skill, helping them experience different types of skill and talent. Personally, I think there are advantages in bot
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