Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

With the invention of the Internet and all its possibilities, the traditional educational setting of a room full of students with a teacher standing in front giving instruction, has been challenged. It has been predicted that
style of teaching will soon
vanish but
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vanish, but
I’m quite confident that the traditional
may diminish but will never disappear. For university students, it is certainly true that there are numerous benefits
distance learning. Lectures can be viewed on a computer from anywhere the Internet is available and often whenever it is convenient. Nowadays
is becoming more common, and the trend will most likely continue to grow.
, distance learning is not really feasible when it comes to elementary and high school students who lack the maturity
self-study and need face-to-face interaction with a teacher. There are other drawbacks to eliminating the traditional
For example
, it is difficult for students to engage in
discussions with each other through a computer and
as a result
dynamic will probably suffer due to the absence of energy in the lessons. What is more, without a
atmosphere, students, who get most of their knowledge from the teacher, will miss out on learning from each other. It is
important to remember that courses
as chemistry and biology are interactive and require a lab setting, so distance learning is not really possible. In conclusion, the elimination of
learning will continue, but
trend will be limited to mostly adult education and courses which do not require an interactive academic environment. I’m quite sure that thirty years from now students and teachers will still be spending time together in the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual reality
  • augmented reality
  • traditional teaching methods
  • personalized learning
  • AI (Artificial Intelligence)
  • global connectivity
  • online platforms
  • obsolete
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • digital classrooms
  • economic factors
  • maintaining physical school buildings
  • online learning environments
  • social interaction
  • practical learning experiences
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