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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams below explain a
wave-energy
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machine
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’s design and the
locations
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location
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 options and their costs.
Overall
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, a
wave-energy
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machine
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 generates energy from
wave’s
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the wave’s
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water
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. It utilizes
water
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 and air to generate electricity.
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, a
wave-energy
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machine
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’s location is one of the important factors that affect the result. A
wave-energy
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machine
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 consists of two chambers, two turbines, and
electricity
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an electricity
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 generator. The first chamber allows
water
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 to come inside the machines, the
second
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 one
used
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release
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 air flow outside the
machine
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. The
machine
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 utilizes the turbines to split air from
water
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 and create energy. Despite the
machine
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’s mechanism, it is very important to place the
machine
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 in a suitable place to get the required output. Since the machines located in large waves location create high output, they are very expensive.
In
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 the other side, the machines that
installed
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are installed
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 in a small
waves
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wave
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 position provide low output and have low installation expenses.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave-energy, machine, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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