Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

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water

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inadequecy

lack of an adequate quantity or number

inadequacy

has become a global challenge in the current situation. It is the need of

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the hour

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the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with

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issue

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a global scale. In my opinion, the various facets of

envioronmental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

mangement

the act of managing something

management

should be applied to check

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global problem. The

shortage

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of fresh

water

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can lead to various problems.

Firstly

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will

impact

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the day to day life of a common man. It would not only

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the basic living style of the people

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but it would

also

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break the equilibrium of the surrounding ecosystem

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For example

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, drinking

water

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shortage

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would directly

impact

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on the survival of mankind and cascading

impact

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can be as

sever

intensely or extremely bad or unpleasant in degree or quality

severe

as critical illness and fatal health disorders.

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due to the

shortage

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of fresh

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people would try to discover other alternative

water

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reservoiers

a large or extra supply of something

reservoirs

such

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as sea

water

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etc.

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can lead to

surviaval

a state of surviving; remaining alive

survival

for

existence

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existing

existential

situation

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resulting in

searious

concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities

serious

health hazards due to

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contamination, downside growth of

economy

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the economy

and the entire global population. There are several precautions need to be taken care in order to prevent

fresh

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a fresh water shortage

water

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shortage

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Prevention of deforestation is the

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major step to prevent

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global issue. Apart from that

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preserving rivers

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controlling environmental pollution

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creating awareness of plantation can help in

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issue

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In conclusion

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with skyrocketing population and

alarming rate

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the alarming rate

of pollution

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strict measures should be taken care to

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the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with

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gloabl

involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope

global

challenge of

inadequency

lack of an adequate quantity or number

inadequacy

in Fresh

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days

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the days

are not far when the entire mankind will be victimized and will be pushed to witness serious consequences as never encountered before.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

276 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

water scarcity
irrigation
contaminated
waterborne diseases
ecosystems
biodiversity
pandemics
economic downturn
social unrest
food security
resource management
conservation efforts
sustainable
desalination
rainwater harvesting

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Fully explain your ideas

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