Write about the following topic: Many people choose natural healing methods, such as acupuncture and massage therapy to recover from illness. Others prefer to use pharmaceutical drugs prescribed by their doctor for their alignments. Discuss both views and give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The Current medical can be broadly classified
into
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in
two ways of healing methods, namely the natural healing method and using the pharmaceutical drugs
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
e
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the allopathy. Many people nowadays have
more broader undertanding
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a broader understanding
more broader understanding
broader understanding
broader undertanding
more broad undertanding
of what they
had prefer
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had preferred
to
trat
interact in a certain way
treat
trust
theirmedical
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their medical
ailnment
an often persistent bodily disorder or disease; a cause for complaining
ailments
. Every individual with their experience or response to the
treatment
prefer
one
choice
over the other. Natural healing method like
accupunture
treatment of pain or disease by inserting the tips of needles at specific points on the skin
acupuncture
, massage therapy, oil
treatment
which has more of
physical
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a physical treatment
treatment
by an expert is being
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
more. I believe in
this
scenario, because of 2 main
reason
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reasons
,
firstly
the side effects of
this
mode of
treatment
is
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are
minimal,
secondly
because of the natural way of healing the would not mostly involve oil and
threapy
by that means or because of that
thereby
. With the ease of free
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
through internet easier approach to these facilities around the world. Some of these treatments would
also
need
one
to have patience and time as most of the ailments take
good amount
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a good amount
of time to respond to natural treatments.
On the other hand
majority of people prefer to use the pharmaceutical drugs. It is a much more easier option in terms of both
accessbility
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
and availability. The pharmaceutical industry is widely spread and well advertised that most of us would not even think twice before taking
tablets
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the tablets
prescibed
set down as a rule or guide
prescribed
by our doctor.But it is
also
true that the industry has progressed to well and with many advanced techniques it is able provide solutions to varied health issues from small cold to even heart transplantations. The
choice
between both the methods is a complete situational
choice
.
For
example
Accept comma addition
example, one
one
of my
collegue
an associate that one works with
colleague
colleagues
who suffered from
a
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an
auto immune
of or relating to the immune response of the body against substance normally present in the body
autoimmune
disease preferred to choose allopathy for a long time only to realize that she was not responding to any medication ultimately forcing her to choose
naturapathy
a method of treating disease using food and exercise and heat to assist the natural healing process
naturopathy
. Both the options are great ways of treating an ailments. Depending upon varied
factores
anything that contributes causally to a result
factors
factories
fractures
and their ailments
one
has to make a prudent
choice
between the two.
Luckily with
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Luckily, with
Luck with
Luck Luck with
Lucky with
more
availabilty
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of internet
one
is able to approach the natural healing methods.
Submitted by shendge.abhishek on

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