Write about the following topic: Many people choose natural healing methods, such as acupuncture and massage therapy to recover from illness. Others prefer to use pharmaceutical drugs prescribed by their doctor for their alignments. Discuss both views and give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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accupunture
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and availability. The pharmaceutical industry is widely spread and well advertised that most of us would not even think twice before taking the quality of being at hand when needed
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tablets
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the tablets
prescibed
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also
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disease preferred to choose allopathy for a long time only to realize that she was not responding to any medication ultimately forcing her to choose of or relating to the immune response of the body against substance normally present in the body
autoimmune
naturapathy
.
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naturopathy
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