It is important for children to learn the diffirence between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The ability of recognizing between right and wrong is formed from very early years in a person’s lifetime.
Thus some
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Thus, some
people are convinced that punishment is crucial in parenting in term of raising cognitive about good and bad. I advocate that raising children’s cognition, between right and
wrong especially
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wrong, especially
, should be done from toddler stage. There is a nuance characteristic among events happening around the world, so that learning how to distinguish and classify them into two opposite groups is inevitable. It is even more important to a small child. Our society is based on moral standard which needs to be learned and practiced. In many perceptions, people could judge others’
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
and actions in
diffirent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ways. The reason for
that is
that had raised in various situations and methods, either culprits or
judgers
determine the result of (a competition)
judges
. The cognitive formation is influenced by the teaching methods and the surrounding environment. Punishment is
a
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an
effective complementary tool to remind them
wether
introduces two alternatives
whether
either
a past circumstance was bad of good.
Otherwise
, it is not that much miracle. If the sentences provoke those children relentlessly, it could bring on negative effects
such
as being misled by
invert conception
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the invert conception
of
distinction
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the distinction
between good and bad.
For example
, typical crimes had had
harst
the locus of feelings and intuitions
heart
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childhoods with imitations their parents’ incomprehensions about those terms. In conclusion, children should be taught compulsory how to perceive good and bad
at
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as
soon as possible.
Besides
, punishment could be
use
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used
to support teachers and parents in upbringing but it has to curb reverse
effections
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
.

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