A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organisation as part of their programe. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the type of courses requirement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The
curicullum
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
of various courses needs to be updated with
time
. One of the
prominent
Suggestion
most prominent
change is
offereing
something offered (as a proposal or bid)
offering
the
student
to take up internships.
most
Suggestion
Most
pof
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
these
beimg
Suggestion
are
being
unpaid for. Taking up an internship as part of
education
can give a head start for a
student
about the real
time
work
environment, but on the
otherhand
Suggestion
other hand
it would take up school
time
of
student
where he could've learned new subjects. There are many factors that support in favour of educational institutions for including internships during school
time
. One of the most prominent
reason
Suggestion
reasons
would be to give exposure to the
student
Suggestion
study
of
work
culture.
Hence
providing various learnings including, employee relationships, handling
work
pressure, communication between
collegeus
the body of faculty and students of a college
colleges
college us
colleagues
and
work
sharing.
This
wouldgive
Suggestion
would give
a peak into how his
education
would be used during
work
and his area of improvement towards ones's personality
deve;lopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
even before he heads into the real world.
For example
, professional like doctors would need to have prior experience in working with patients and learn more from senior doctors on the way they approach a situation.
Also
, from my own personal experience
,
Accept space
,
I was able to make a prudent choice of the type of organization and
carrer
feel concern or interest
care
I had like to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
parse
because of the 3 internship
oppurtunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
.
On the contrary
, for
major number
Suggestion
a major number
of
students
Suggestion
students'
student's
student
education
during school is only
time
one would be spending on learning various subjects from professionals. So, some may prefer to learn some electives and gain more knowledge of a particular subject of interest in more depth. In conclusion, if an educational institution
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believes
that an unpaid job would
hel
give help or assistance; be of service
help
[
Accept space
[
p in overall
develoment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of students pursuing their tertiary
education
, they need to respect the course structure and complete their internships. Not necessarily
this
would always hinder the continuity in learning progress.
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