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A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organisation as part of their programe. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the type of courses requirement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The
curicullum
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
 of various courses needs to be updated with
time
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. One of the
prominent
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most prominent
 change is
offereing
something offered (as a proposal or bid)
offering
 the
student
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 to take up internships.
most
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Most
pof
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 these
beimg
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are
being
 unpaid for. Taking up an internship as part of
education
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 can give a head start for a
student
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 about the real
time
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work
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 environment, but on the
otherhand
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other hand
 it would take up school
time
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 of
student
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 where he could've learned new subjects. There are many factors that support in favour of educational institutions for including internships during school
time
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. One of the most prominent
reason
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reasons
 would be to give exposure to the
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student
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study
 of
work
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 culture.
Hence
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 providing various learnings including, employee relationships, handling
work
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 pressure, communication between
collegeus
the body of faculty and students of a college
colleges
college us
colleagues
 and
work
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 sharing.
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wouldgive
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would give
 a peak into how his
education
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 would be used during
work
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 and his area of improvement towards ones's personality
deve;lopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
 even before he heads into the real world.
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, professional like doctors would need to have prior experience in working with patients and learn more from senior doctors on the way they approach a situation.
Also
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, from my own personal experience
,
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,
 I was able to make a prudent choice of the type of organization and
carrer
feel concern or interest
care
 I had like to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
parse
 because of the 3 internship
oppurtunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
.
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, for
major number
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a major number
 of
students
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students'
student's
student
education
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 during school is only
time
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 one would be spending on learning various subjects from professionals. So, some may prefer to learn some electives and gain more knowledge of a particular subject of interest in more depth. In conclusion, if an educational institution
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believes
 that an unpaid job would
hel
give help or assistance; be of service
help
[
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p in overall
develoment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 of students pursuing their tertiary
education
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, they need to respect the course structure and complete their internships. Not necessarily
this
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 would always hinder the continuity in learning progress.
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