Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some solutions

Nowaday
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Nowadays
,
climate
changing is one of the largest issues humans face in the 21st century and rising
tidals
the periodic rise and fall of the sea level under the gravitational pull of the moon
tides
are
creeply
annoying and unpleasant
creepy
to rise at a cautious
rates
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rate
. Within the scope of
this
writing, I will look at some of the issues of the
climate
changing and how they can be overcome. One supreme problem of
climate
changing worth mentioning is that it causes flooding people's house and business. Needless to say, the rising sea level
can made
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can make
houses of many people under the water. For
intances
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
entrances
, Vietnam has many houses along the coast and if sea levels are continuing to rise, the
tir
of them or themselves
their
tree
houses will be
disappear
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disappearing
. To combat
this
problem, the government should build flood barriers
such
as dams, waterway...
to
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To
prevent
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
of flood.
An other
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Another
solution can be mentioned is that people need to move to higher areas to live.
In addition
to
this
, one
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
problem
that is
of great significance is that losing of agricultural land. People will
unemploy
not engaged in a gainful occupation
unemployed
if they lose their land. A better example can be best provided that most of the profession in our country is
farming
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farmed
so land plays
as
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
a
very important role in their life. Another
pratical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
solution that they will switch to more suitable
scrops
the yield from plants in a single growing season
crops
s crops
scripts
to maintain their
finance
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financial
. All in all,
climate
changing causes many issues to human rate. Realizing
this
proplems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
, many
country
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countries
in over the world have had
trend
shaped or conditioned or disciplined by training; often used as a combining form
trained
to be environmentally friendly, to go green and being sustainable. Vietnam
is
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is also having
also
have that environmentally
conscicous
intentionally conceived
conscious
and we hope for a better change in the future.
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