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In some countries young people are enncourage to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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It is true to say
that is
 a number of
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
 young people are
encourage
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encouraged
 to work or travel for a year between finishing high
school
 and starting university studies these days.
Atlthough
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Although
this
 brings positive effects, there are some negative effects that we should consider.
This
 essay will analyse the pros and cons of
this
 issue On the one hand it is obvious that there are many significant advantages of working and
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 after
gradueing
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduating
 from high
school
.One of the major plus points is that young people gain a lot of experience and social knowledge.
In other
words when
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words, when
 people are in high
school
,
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,
they live under protected home environment
,
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,
in the case of any problem
,
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,
they can seek parents and friends help and advice.But when they travel
,
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,
they are on their own and if they face any problem
,
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,
they will learn to deal with it.Needless to say
this
 not only gives them the experience to deal with tough situations later in their life but
also
 gives them confidence
On the other
hand there
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hand, there
 are some adverse consequences that need to be taken into consideration.One of the serious problem is that education process will be disrupted.The student might
foget
dismiss from the mind; stop remembering
forget
forgot
forfeit
 some essential
knowledge
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knowledge, such
such
 as physics and mathematics which is
ussually
under normal conditions
usually
need
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needed
 in the University.
In other
words students
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words, students
 can face some difficulties when they came back to the university.Undoubtedly some people would think that
completion
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completes
completing
 the academic studies education is not really
neccessarily
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necessary
necessarily
 as long as the money is available In conclusion
,
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,
it can be said that there are both positives and negatives of taking a year gap between the high
school
 and the university.My personal view is that
the
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The
 advantages far outweigh the problems. It is advised that it should be encouraged for young people to work and travel for a year between finishing high
school
 and starting academic studies so they can build a better life for their future
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