Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Animals
such
as humans are an important part of the
nature
and
whole earth
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the whole earth
. Because of
civilization
progress and modern technologies, many animal
species
are in threat of not existing in
future
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the future
a future
or losing their natural habits. While some people consider the protection only for those animals that contribute to humans, others disagree. Nowadays, there are various negative
environment
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environmental
effects and problems caused by
civilization
progress. Because of climate
changes
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change
, pollution of many locations and deforestation, many
species
are in a danger.
Additionally
, in recent years people have started to protect those animals that are crucial for humans,
such
as bees. The reason for taking care only for useful animals is because there is not enough financial support to save all
species
. What is more, many animals live
on
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in
locations that are unique
on
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to
the Earth,
for instance
deserts and jungles and it is hard to replace these locations with other places. Unfortunately, if
civilization
continues polluting an environment, there will not be enough time to protect all
species
.
However
, people's priority should be taking care of all
species
. Many insects or other animals do not help directly to humans, but their contribution to ecosystem is crucial for
nature
stability.
For instance
, beavers are not useful to humans,
however
, they are important for rivers and making dams. In conclusion, there is a big threat of many
species
' extinction. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with the statement because all animals contribute to
nature
and its stability. It is not important how useful they are to humans, but how crucial are for
environment
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the environment
. To be honest, without ecosystem and
nature
, there will not be
civilization
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civilized
.
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