When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it
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It
is undeniably true that life a nation is
unmimagable
difficult to use or handle or manage because of size or weight or shape
unmanageable
without designing a building the most
piviot
being of crucial importance
pivotal
factor is
intentional use
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the intentional use
an intentional use
of the production rather than its
outwords
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
appearance
.
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.
I
srongly
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
agree with the statement presented
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
elucidate my stand in the following paragraphs
.
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.
to
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To
begin with, there are
number
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a number
of building development in our nation
such
as hospitals
colledge
industreis
of or relating to or resulting from industry
industrial
societies
.
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.
the
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The
ample of building to making a news designing
its
the thing named or in question
it
looks like a so beautiful and provide the proper infrastructure in the building anyone can attract when he see the new
designing building
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designing, building
they
lik
prefer or wish to do something
like
to go in
this
building some
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building, some
people do not use
the good
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the best
material in the building its the bad consequence of our
enviourment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
to
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
we can consider that some time
earth quake
shaking and vibration at the surface of the earth resulting from underground movement along a fault plane or from volcanic activity
earthquake
come
.
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.
if
Suggestion
If
the building material will not good our building can be destroyed
further more
in addition
Furthermore
Further more
,
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,
the most of the school and the hospital
outwords
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
outwards
look is so beautiful whereas the internal
enviounment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
is not better teacher are not
provide
Suggestion
providing
the good
Suggestion
the best
better
best
education to their student when the student take the
addmission
the act of admitting someone to enter
admission
admissions
in schools so it shows only
outwords
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
beauty and take the so money from parents one student can take the knowledge of study from normal school
.
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.
they
Suggestion
They
can learnt
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can learn
a lot of things
.
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.
its
Suggestion
It's
Its
dosent
does not
doesn't
matter
in
Suggestion
In
the conclusion
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
recapulate
regain or make up for
recuperate
my
viwes
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
views
viewers
vows
that
immuerable
too numerous to be counted
innumerable
anyone should not see the
outworrds
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
look of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
is
triggled
any instruction that works first one way and then the other; it turns something on the first time it is used and then turns it off the next time
toggled
by
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
factors of
people
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peoples
history of which some are
delibrate
carefully thought out in advance
deliberate
to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
our need while the rest occur due to circumstances but need immediate attention
.
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.
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