When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It
it
is undeniably true that life a nation is
difficult to use or handle or manage because of size or weight or shape
unmanageable
unmimagable
without designing a building the most
being of crucial importance
pivotal
piviot
factor is
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the intentional use
an intentional use
intentional use
of the production rather than its
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
outwords
appearance
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.
.
I
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
srongly
agree with the statement presented
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
elucidate my stand in the following paragraphs
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.
.
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To
to
begin with, there are
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a number
number
of building development in our nation
such
as hospitals
colledge
of or relating to or resulting from industry
industrial
industreis
societies
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.
.
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The
the
ample of building to making a news designing
the thing named or in question
it
its
looks like a so beautiful and provide the proper infrastructure in the building anyone can attract when he see the new
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designing, building
designing building
they
prefer or wish to do something
like
lik
to go in
this
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building, some
building some
people do not use
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the best
the good
material in the building its the bad consequence of our
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
enviourment
to
be characteristic of
exemplify
examplify
we can consider that some time
shaking and vibration at the surface of the earth resulting from underground movement along a fault plane or from volcanic activity
earthquake
earth quake
come
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.
.
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If
if
the building material will not good our building can be destroyed
in addition
Furthermore
Further more
further more
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,
,
the most of the school and the hospital
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
outwards
outwords
look is so beautiful whereas the internal
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
enviounment
is not better teacher are not
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providing
provide
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the best
better
best
the good
education to their student when the student take the
the act of admitting someone to enter
admission
admissions
addmission
in schools so it shows only
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
outwords
beauty and take the so money from parents one student can take the knowledge of study from normal school
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.
.
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They
they
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can learn
can learnt
a lot of things
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.
.
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It's
Its
its
does not
doesn't
dosent
matter
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In
in
the conclusion
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,
,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
regain or make up for
recuperate
recapulate
my
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
views
viewers
vows
viwes
that
too numerous to be counted
innumerable
immuerable
anyone should not see the
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
outworrds
look of
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the environment
environment
is
any instruction that works first one way and then the other; it turns something on the first time it is used and then turns it off the next time
toggled
triggled
by
too numerous to be counted
myriad
myraid
factors of
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peoples
people
history of which some are
carefully thought out in advance
deliberate
delibrate
to
put in effect
fulfil
fulfill
our need while the rest occur due to circumstances but need immediate attention
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.
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