Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?

Big stores have always been a hub for people because of availability of
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a wide variety
wide variety
of assorted
food
products. Recently, there has been
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an
a
untoward concern whether stores should focus more on selling local
food
products over imported
food
products. I too believe, that local
food
products
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have
has
more benefits over imported
food
products as they are fresh and can support local traders, farmers, businessmen and
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over all
overall
nations growth. To commence with, undoubtedly, imported
food
products will enhance the variety in their own category, yet, they cannot be treated as a substitute for local
food
products. Local
food
products
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ensure
ensures
fresh
food
with no or less
preservatives
as they are grown in home country and does not necessitate the
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use
usage
of
preservatives
, exception to
this
can be perishable products.
Furthermore
, Local
food
products supports small farmers, traders and businessman
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enhance
to enhance
businesses and
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production, which
production which
in-turn leads to the overall growth of the nation as
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the money
money
stays within the country, and can be used for development of public facilities. Nations supporting local
food
products tend to prosper more because of more focus on the growth of its people and businesses resulting in increased contribution to the country and its development.
On the contrary
, imported
food
products
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ensure
ensures
the reach of the people to different variety of
food
products,
however
, these products require higher usage of
preservatives
as they travel across the
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nation's
nations
border spending more time in transit. Enclosing freshness at the cost of
preservatives
have
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a
an
negative impact on people’s health. As per a survey, more than 60% of imported
food
product have higher preservative contents than local
food
products which is resulting in a steep decline in their consumption. In summary, undoubtedly, imported
food
products add more
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
to the table, yet, local
food
products outweigh them in freshness, preservative content and nutritional value and stores should
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emphasize
emphasis
more on selling local
food
products than imported
food
products.

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