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Local people do not go very often to museums or historical sites. Why is that? What can be done to change the situation?

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Museums and monuments showcase
rich
Suggestion
the rich history
history
 and cultural heritage of a country. Tourist throng and travellers are often attracted towards museums and monuments whereas local people tend to act
otherwise
. In
this
 essay, we will discuss both the reason behind
this
 behaviour as well as the enhancements required to turn the table
up side
the highest or uppermost side of anything
upside
 down. To commence with, local people are well aware of the
history
 and their ancestral cultural heritage, which is the most prominent factor to stop them from visiting museums very often.
Furthermore
, the museums
stays
Suggestion
stay
 the same for
years making
Accept comma addition
years, making
 it very boring for frequent visitors, and the authority
do not take
Suggestion
does not take
 effort in arranging a more inclusive environment to change
this
 notion. Admission ticket charges can be another factor to limit the presence of local people in museums, because people are not very interested in investing money on something they are already aware of.
Basis
Suggestion
Bas is
 a recent survey, 85% of people believe that the lighting and ambience of a museum
is
Suggestion
are
 majorly dull which results in a very depressing environment
instead
 of uplifting and encouraging to learn more about
history
 and heritage. To turn the table upside down, government and authority can step up with minor enhancements
such
 as organizing role-play and cultural plays based on
history
Suggestion
historical
 fortnightly,
this
 can attract local people to learn
history
 in a more dramatic and interactive way.
Additionally
, arranging
lightshows
, special programs for kids and quiz programs based on traditional culture and
history
, would definitely help increase the number of local people to
museum
Suggestion
the museum
. In a nutshell, undoubtedly, there are numerous reasons for local people to avoid visiting museums, but, through minor improvising efforts
such
 as arranging interactive shows, exhibitions and quizzes the decline slope can be inverted easily.
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