In recent years, people in many countries have been able to afford more material possessions such as electronic kitchen appliances, computers and vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this increased level of affluence, and give your opinion about whether this is a positive or negative development.

Today’s people in the world buy a lot of things
such
as kitchen
equipment
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Equipment
, cars or computers
to serve
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serve
for their life.
This
has resulted in
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essay will discuss the benefits and
drawbacks
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Drawbacks
impact
on
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of
changing to spend. There are
so great many
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so many great
reason
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reasons
for individual domestics to buy a car or
computer
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Computer
.
Firstly
, people have a car can drive to many places they want
that
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That
makes them get freedom.
Also they
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Also, they
can drive to job,
this
means
they
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They
can obtain many different
job
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jobs
which
not depend
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don't depend
on anything.
Secondly
,
computer
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the computer
computers
also
more important chances to study or find out
something
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Something
we do not know or watch news or films that TV does not
have
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Have
. Especially, we can connected communication with other people
in
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In
the world.
Lastly
, women always busy at work or chores
therefore
they
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They
need kitchen devices so that it can help them
cleaning
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clean
house or
cooking
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Cooking
.
However
, synonymous consumption
bring
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brings
on more disadvantage. One
of
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If
Of
the main problem is pollution, which come from the manufactory. Mode of production cars, computers or other appliances probably leads
to
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To
use the amount of resource that increasing pollution levels. After
producing
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Producing
, the proportion of cars supply to greenhouse gas release the
environment
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An environment
Environment
which makes people ill.
In addition
, technology devices or
kitchen
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Kitchen
equipment
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equipment, although they
although
they do not affect the
environment
but
they
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They
also
risky explosiveness and take up space in
house
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the house
a house
. To sum up, the material possessions are necessary for real life but
first
of
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Of
all we should aware of concern and protect the
environment
.
Also
need
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Need
to balance these advantages between spending and detrimental
environment
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Environment
.
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