Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think ,might be effective

Some individuals argue that the heightened
price
of
petrol
is the most effective method of tackling to
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grow
growing
traffic and environmental pollution. While I accept that
this
method is good in some ways, I believe that there are better measures for
this
problem.
To begin
with, I believe it is a good idea
Suggestion
for
of
to
raising the
price
of
petrol
.
Firstly
,
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
goverments
introduce the heightened
price
of
petrol
, which may restrict people to using the private cars.
As a result
, citizens have the tendency to use bicycles or public transport rather than using private cars.
Besides
, increasing the
price
of
petrol
has
also
detrimental effects on the life of people. Due to the heightened
price
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
pf
petrol
, ticket
price
also
increases.
Therefore
,
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
specially
low-income people may face financial problem.
However
, I would argue that there are better methods of decreasing congestion and protecting environment. The
first
one is to raise people’s awareness about consequences which may occur
Accept space
.
.
For example
, Vietnam government held the meeting to promote the movement called Green Summer. Many teenagers supported
this
movement and did instructions of the organiser. Another measure is that governments should invest a huge amount of money on improving public transport and constructing
Suggestion
a new railway
new railway
new rail way
for bikers. In conclusion, I believe apart
a giver or sender
from
form
increasing the
price
of
petrol
there are more effective ways to solve growing traffic and environmental pollution.

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