In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A small

porpotion

the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole

proportion

portion

of people in countries around the

world

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is said

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are said

to have

enourmous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

salary compare to other normal employees. It is argued that having citizen who earn huge salaries bring benefits to one country,

however

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, others claim that it is needed to have regulations or laws to limit the amount of pay rate among these executives and managers. On the one hand, there are some benefits of offering maximum

wage

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rates to top executives and directors of a corporation. Having

brilliant CEO

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a brilliant CEO

or directors who understands the

company

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's vision and mission plays a crucial role in the development of a

company

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. In order to have these people, it is a must to pay extremely high

wage

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rates to either attract or hold these talent workers. Paying high

wage

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also

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a way to maintain the

competive

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

comparative

advatages

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

of a

company

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over competitors in the market and

also

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to avoid loosing brilliant people into the enemy hands.

For example

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Alphabet multinational

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an Alphabet multinational company

the Alphabet multinational company

company

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which ranks in the top ten biggest companies in the

world

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, pays their CEO huge amount of money to keep the

company

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on track. Earning huge money

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also guarantee

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also guarantees

has also guaranteed

is also guaranteeing

that top executive will pay full attention to the development of the

company

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and not wonder about earning their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

. In details, Tim Cook, who receives annual salaries among the highest in the

world

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, can spend all his time

to make

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making

Apple the best

company

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in the

world

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, in my opinion, it is very risky for a country to have firms that process a huge gap between the top earners and normal workers. Having limitation on the maximum

wage

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rate can decrease the inequality among employees in one

company

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and by that create a friendly working environments. More money will be invested

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the long-term strategies of a corporation

such

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as technology development, marketing strategy

enhance

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enhances

and firm sustainability.

This

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will bring many benefits to not only the business firm

itself but

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itself, but

also

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to the nation. In conclusion,

eleminating

terminate, end, or take out

eliminating

the limit of maximum

wage

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rate can outweigh its drawbacks. Loosing top executives to other competitive countries or opposite opponents can result in the destruction of a

company

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and economic depreciation. In my point of view, nation leaders must not setting limitation to avoid any harmful

affects

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

to the business firms and economic developments.

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