Task 2: Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, computers
replace
Suggestion
are replacing
libraries has been receiving a great deal of public attention.
Although
this
trend
appear
Suggestion
appears
attractive, the downsides will be more significant. On the one hand, using computers might have some merits.
First
, since the internet can up-to-date any information immediately without a click of
mouse
Suggestion
a mouse
the mouse
, people do not need to go to libraries. In fact, with
developing
Suggestion
the development
development
developments
of technology, people can broaden the knowledge and learn anything new without reading paper books at libraries.
Second
, by providing a
lot
of e-books, students can use those when they need reading books for study at school.
This
means that libraries become not necessary for students, which can be replaced by computers.
On the other hand
, public libraries become more modern with top-north facilities.
First
, in order to install computers and internet access at libraries, libraries not only a
place
for people read paper books, but it
also
is a
place
for working and study.
For example
, my university library is a
place
that a
lot
of students use for studying, reading books or using computers free, which is very convenient.
Second
, if public libraries disappeared, there would increase unemployed who work in libraries.
This
means that public libraries provide jobs for a
lot
of people, which reduce the unemployed rate.
In addition
, libraries have an important
place
for people who love
savor
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
savour
books in a quiet
place
.
Although
computers can do a
lot
of functions, the importance of
library
Suggestion
the library
cannot deny. By considering the role of traditional libraries, people can
choice
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choose
a suitable ways for them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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