Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Financial condition has profound impacts on children’s upbringing these days. It is argued that children coming from

disadvantaged background

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disadvantaged backgrounds

a disadvantaged background

are better

equiped

provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate

equipped

in addressing issues than those of affluent families. From my perspective, I disagree with

this

view because of these following justifications. On the one hand, it is irrefutable that underprivileged kids are capable of making wise decisions independently.

This

is because they have to get accustomed to adversity from an early age.

As a result

, poor children ought to be self-caring, and simultaneously covering their family’s expenditures by being engaged in part-time jobs after school.

In addition

,

hardships

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the hardships

they

have been through represent

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have through been representing

have through been represented

have been through represent

valuable lessons about material life and human

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

behaviours

, conducting to their judicious choices in reality. No doubt,

dificulty

an effort that is inconvenient

difficulty

difficult

is a great teacher,

however

wealthy parents can provide appropriate

education

and nurturing, which would facilitate the self-preparation for adulthood of their children.

Firstly

, adolescents without financial burden could be easily exposed to advanced

education

.

This

allows them to be knowledgeable and well-qualified in

this

knowledge-based society. When applying for certain professions,

for example

, well-educated students might academically perform better than those lacking

further

education

, which enables them to be dominant in the labour force.

Secondly

,

although

these affluent children might be unfamiliar with innate adversity, their families always seize on any opportunity to let them be matured. Students who study overseas,

for instance

, sharpen a well-informed mindset and multinational perspective towards diversified facets of life, leading to discriminating

judgements

an opinion formed by judging something

judgments

. Problems, in

this

case, would no longer be a formidable task. In conclusion,

education

lays a concrete foundation for children’s growth.

Therfore

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Therefore

, I do believe that wealthier children would have more advantages in terms of preparation for the future.