You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

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Dear John I am writing

this

letter to express my concerns about some issues that I have been facing in

office

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the office

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that are affecting me. As you are aware due to department restructuring some of my team members were let go from the services of the company. Some of my team members are holding me responsible for

this

and are being non-cooperative in day to day work.

This

is severely impacting the departments as well as my performance. I would appreciate

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it if

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your office can clarify that the downsizing decisions were part of the new corporate strategy and were not based on my recommendations. I had no part to play in the exercise and was not asked to provide any inputs in

this

matter. It would be great if you can set up a meeting

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fellow co-workers in the organization and explain the rationale behind these decisions and clarify that these were taken by the management.

This

can help clear the misunderstandings. Yours sincerely

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

163 words

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