Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree

people
Suggestion
People
have contrasting views about whether a satisfying career life
is easily come
Suggestion
has easily come
is easily coming
easily comes
from those people who choose their
job
Suggestion
jobs
in early period rather than who regularly switch jobs or not. In my opinion,
chaging
marked by continuous change or effective action
changing
career paths could have some benefits,
however
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
tend to agree with the idea that remaining a
simillar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
job might obtain more satisfied than frequently change. Generally speaking, regularly altering jobs could bring a lot of positive
impacts
Suggestion
impact
to labours
(
Accept space
(
particular
Suggestion
particularly
young people). One of the main reasons is that workers could figure out the most suitable career after trying several jobs and significant different workplaces for them. Another reason is that many workers find interesting when they have opportunities to face with new
chanllenges
take exception to
challenges
instead
of repetition tasks.
For example
, my close friend jumped out at least 4 jobs within 2 years after graduated, that give him a lot of experience and many friends. Despite the above arguments,
sustainble
capable of being sustained
sustainable
job actually supply many advantages to employees. Owing to the fact that people stay in their workplace would have greater to promote in
higher position
Suggestion
a higher position
, which affect directly to worker's income.
Additionlly
Suggestion
Additionally
, people keep doing their jobs could avoid making mistakes when they are too
simillar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
with
Suggestion
to
it that could occur with new employees.
For instance
, many officers would not be able to work outside building when they choose other jobs in
open area
Suggestion
open areas
an open area
because different atmosphere. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would say that employees might gain more satisfied when they remain in their field for a long time than work in a short time and quit.

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