Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree

people

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People

have contrasting views about whether a satisfying career life

is easily come

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has easily come

is easily coming

easily comes

from those people who choose their

job

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jobs

in early period rather than who regularly switch jobs or not. In my opinion,

chaging

marked by continuous change or effective action

changing

career paths could have some benefits,

however

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

tend to agree with the idea that remaining a

simillar

marked by correspondence or resemblance

similar

job might obtain more satisfied than frequently change. Generally speaking, regularly altering jobs could bring a lot of positive

impacts

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impact

to labours

(

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particular

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particularly

young people). One of the main reasons is that workers could figure out the most suitable career after trying several jobs and significant different workplaces for them. Another reason is that many workers find interesting when they have opportunities to face with new

chanllenges

take exception to

challenges

instead

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of repetition tasks.

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, my close friend jumped out at least 4 jobs within 2 years after graduated, that give him a lot of experience and many friends. Despite the above arguments,

sustainble

capable of being sustained

sustainable

job actually supply many advantages to employees. Owing to the fact that people stay in their workplace would have greater to promote in

higher position

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a higher position

, which affect directly to worker's income.

Additionlly

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Additionally

, people keep doing their jobs could avoid making mistakes when they are too

simillar

marked by correspondence or resemblance

similar

with

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to

it that could occur with new employees.

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, many officers would not be able to work outside building when they choose other jobs in

open area

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open areas

an open area

because different atmosphere. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would say that employees might gain more satisfied when they remain in their field for a long time than work in a short time and quit.