The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Today, English is
one
of the most popular languages in the
world
and it is undeniable that English plays
such
an important role in the
world
's business. The tourism development has made English become the most prominent
language
in the
world
.
Therefore
,
this
essay will show the advantages and disadvantages when English becomes the only
language
that is
spoken globally. There are evident advantages to having
one
global
language
.
Firstly
, having
such
a global
language
creates greater understanding between many people all over the
world
. We do not have to learn any foreign languages, people from all the walks on the street can easily communicate with foreigners when they use the same
language
.
Secondly
, having
one
global
language
gives a range of opportunities for individual development. Using different languages usually
restains
keep under control; keep in check
restrains
returns
many people showing their best. So that, those who actually have abilities can not accomplish in making their dreams, their passion.
Thirdly
, using the same
language
also
helps economic growth, it is easier for business to cooperate and enrich themselves.
Besides
those
plural of "this"
these
advantages, having
one
global
language
also
involves many disadvantages.
Forthly
Suggestion
Fourthly
, it causes the lack of cultural diversity.
Language
is believed to be the most important thing that creates a nation or a minority. What if all countries use only
one
language
? Is there only
one
country in the
world
? Fifthly, the discrimination of the minority groups will exist if English becomes the global
language
. The English's native speakers will be on the higher level and the people who have never approached Engish are nearly deaf and mute, those people
can not
can not
cannot
communicate and cooperate with the others.
they
Suggestion
They
will be discriminated by the people who can speak English fluently.
Finally
, there will be the downturn in tourism.
people
Suggestion
People
go
travalling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to relax, to enjoy the fascinating views and to widen their knowledge about the place that they come. Every country
use
Suggestion
uses
only
one
language
- English, so there is no national culture and people do not have to move, television and Internet are popular now. In short, having
one
language
also
has advantages and disadvantages, it should be carefully considered before making any worldwide change, especially
language
.
Submitted by vietnhando2003 on

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