Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

Physical

exercise

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have been proven

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has been proven

by scientists to be vital in the physical development and healthy living of the population. Physical activities, sports have played an important part in the development, mentally and physically of the partakers especially the

school

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children as most people believe,

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some don'

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. I strongly agree that children who do engage in sporting activities have an edge over those who don'

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. Sports as the name Intel's, is a physical

exercise

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most

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expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

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times involving the whole parts of the body as well as the mental

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the brain. When an individual engages in sporting activities they feel great and more energised to face the

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activities.

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, when I was in

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school I

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school, I

do start my day with

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, after which

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of me or myself

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bath and set-off for classes at the end of the day I see myself achieving more than those who don'

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and

also

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I accomplish more

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in

those days. If a person should engage in a sporting activity or not

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for some still remains optional

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to

them they

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them, they

believe and sees it that physical

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is a waste of time as the children are there in the

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for academic activities and nothing else.

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most Morden schools in my country

do not have playing

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have not played

haven't played

do not play

don't play

aren't playing

are not playing

field

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the field

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so young scholars do follow a routine of home -

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- home and over and over again without an atom of

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in the

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curriculum and some parents as well give the offspring no chance to

exercise

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, sharing the same ideology with the teachers. In conclusion, the importance of physical

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can not

can not

cannot

be thrown to the corner as it is essential for both the child's mental and physical development which shows in their academic results

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and

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ones are

more healthier

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healthier

more healthy

than those who don'

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and

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, they are less likely to be

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used improperly or excessively especially drugs

abused

obese

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