Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Several countries do a
lot
of
expenditure
on training sportsmen competing in global sporting competitions. While I do agree that proper training facilities should be provided to athletes, it should
impact
the monetary allocations for other public projects and should be based on countries available resources. Several countries do a
lot
of
expenditure
on training sportsmen competing in global sporting competitions. While I do agree that proper training facilities should be provided to athletes, it should
impact
the monetary allocations for other public projects and should be based on countries available resources. Several countries do a
lot
of
expenditure
on training sportsmen competing in global sporting competitions. While I do agree that proper training facilities should be provided to athletes, it should
impact
the monetary allocations for other public projects and should be based on countries available resources.Several countries do a
lot
of
expenditure
on training sportsmen competing in global sporting competitions. While I do agree that proper training facilities should be provided to athletes, it should
impact
the monetary allocations for other public projects and should be based on countries available resources.

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