The news media have become too much influence in people lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the media has generated tremendous impacts on every aspect of our modern life without us even realizing that.
However
, like many other people, I believe that
news media’s benefits
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the news media’s benefits
cannot outnumber its harms for the reasons as follows.
First
and foremost, in order to gain profits from
advertisement
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the advertisement
advertisements
, the media nowadays often distorts the definition of true beauty and happiness among public audience. In consequence, a large proportion of the population is forced to alter themselves to fit in the
mold
form in clay, wax, etc
mould
of canned perfection by purchasing and goods and services that they want but actually do not need. That leads to over-consumption at global and national scales and ultimately worsens the waste issues.
Secondly
, most
contents
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content
presented in mass media
are biased
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is biased
and sometimes can distract the audience from the real world problems.
In other words
, the media often encourages the pursuit of
luxurious lifestyle
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the luxurious lifestyle
that requires the exploitation and consumption of substantial resources, yet ignoring the fact that these resources can be better utilized for
savinge
an act of economizing; reduction in cost
saving
and improving e the lives of hundreds of millions of poor people struggling
inn
a unit of length equal to one twelfth of a foot
in
poverty and hunger across the world.
On the other hand
, it can be argued that
news media
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the news media
plays
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play
the key role in bridging the gaps of races, cultures, and perspectives worldwide.
Moreover
, the media generates continual innovations through the update of technologies and scientific advances in all corners of the globe. In conclusion, in order to fully leverage the media’s positive potentials, it is highly essential for regulations to be developed to better monitor and address the misuse of news media. It is
also
important that the government should enhance the public’s capacity to become
wiser
having great (or a certain) extent from one side to the other
wider
audience by selecting trusted sources of information and evaluating the gained information in an objective manner.

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