Many museums charge for admission while orthers are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Charging for
admission
in many museums has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, museums should be changed for
admission
for the following reasons. On the on hand, charging for
museums
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museum
museum's
admission
brings many disadvantages.
Firstly
, many financially-disadvantaged people do not have enough money pay for the fees. They do not want to pay for
admission
because it is quite expensive compared with their budgets.
Secondly
, if the museums
is charged
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are charged
for
admission
, many local people will not go there,
as a result
the number of
visitor
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visitors
will decrease. Some local people think going to museums
is
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are
unnecessary. There for, they will not have in-depth understanding of culture, local customs and tradition.
For example
, in many museums in Hanoi, when
government
start
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starts
charging for
admission
, the number of visitors has declined, especially, local people have accounted for the major
rate
an established line of travel or access
route
. It brings many negative effects for governments and
country's
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the country's
economic itself.
On the other hand
, there are many advantages of charging people for
admission
to museums. The
first
reason is that it helps to increase the budget of
nation
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the nation
a nation
nations
. When's charging people for
admission
, it brings money to the
government
so the
government
has enough money to pay for maintenance, salary for staffs or refurbishment in the museums. The
second
reason is that it helps to develop the
nation
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nation's
economy. Because it pushes tourism to develop, attracts many international tourists, who want to explore about the history and culture of Vietnam.
For example
, in many museums in Hanoi the fees for
admission
of international tourists is higher compared to that of local people. To sum up, I think charging people for
admission
is necessary.
Besides
, the
government
should charge for
admission
of international tourists to the museums, provides and free access to local people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial sustainability
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Exhibits
  • Educational programs
  • Facilities
  • Technology
  • Curatorial expertise
  • Visitor experience
  • Value perception
  • Accessibility barriers
  • Inclusiveness
  • Cultural resources
  • Alternative funding
  • Grants
  • Donations
  • Sponsorships
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