More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Cities are considered as places of opportunities
of
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for
a more convenient
life
, but there
are
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is
a multitude of risks which the immigrants are facing. I believe that governments would have solutions to improve the
life
in large metropolises. There
are
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is
some negative impact on who hope to migrate to a
large
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larger
cities
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city
. On top of that, the overwhelming expense is
main problem
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the main problem
main problematic
for those. Citizens of cities have to pay for their living much higher than it is in a small town or village
such
as the cost of education,
treatmen
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatment
,
accomudation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
, transport and even food. Another issue,
those
denotes a person or thing
this
are threatened
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is threatened
by a range of serious environmental problems which affected their health.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
the air pollution is at an alarming due to emission from traffic, factories. It produces the sicknesses relate to lung and make the metropolises less suitable for children to grow up.
Furthermore
, municipal
life
is full of competition and it makes people’s
life
depressed. Some
has
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have
to compete to get in a public car, wait several hours in the traffic jam and fight really hard to get a decent job.
As a result
, city
life
can be unhealthy and stressful. To overcome some major drawbacks of living in cities, the governments should take to tackle these problems.
Firstly
, they should control the prices of the daily commodities and build more high rising buildings to cut down the house rent.
Secondly
, the governments may bring in laws to ban vehicles in
cities center
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the city centre
cities centre
city centre
city center
city's center
and should introduce more public transportation with better facilities to reduce traffic jam. A
third
option would be movie industry and jobs
to
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in
rural areas to diminish the pressure on the large metropolises. In conclusion, the governments should take care to people’ living standard and make sure the rural areas have sufficient job for the residents here.
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