COMPUTERS ARE BECOMING AN ESSENTIAL PART OF EDUCATION. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

As part of the
school
assignment, computers are becoming the requirement. In my opinion, it is beneficial to children as today the average person's work-life resolves around computers and exposing younger people to the
computer
early in
school
prepares them for the future. The most prominent advantage is children get access to the Global
school
, which help them in understanding and learning better. On
other hands
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the other hand
other hand
, sometimes they get distracted easily by social media and
computer
gaming. Using the
computer
at schools, children can access Global libraries like the online video tutorial,
FAQ forums,
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FAQ, forums,
free e-books and they can grasp on fundamental concepts easily. Without the
computer
, students have to rely only on books and tutorials given in the classroom, and if they have any other doubts or if they don't understand
material
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the material
easily, they get only limited help. But
Internet
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the Internet
has truly opened up the whole world to them, and they get the infinite amount of information.
For instance
, for any single math or science problem, they can find many different ways to solve it.
In addition
to that, using forum they can interact with people having
same issues
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the same issues
and learn from each other. To
contrary
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the contrary
, using the
computer
also
brings distractions, for examples,
computer
gaming, and social media, which hinders their progress on studies. While using the
computer
, it is very easy to get off track as it offers many other functionalities. When using study with paper and pen, focus comes easily. One of the examples of
this
is, when using the
computer
for doing an assignment,
children
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the children
end up checking their emails, playing a bit of game and checking their social media, as these functionalities are readily available. If the same assignment is done using Paper- pen, it gets done correctly.
Although
there are some disadvantages to using too much
computer
at
school
, they outweigh advantages as
computer
skills are helpful in selecting good career options and maintaining high profile jobs. Today, around 80% - 90% job requires more or less of
computer
work,
therefore
learning
computer
skills at
school
level is really beneficial. To summarize, using the
computer
at
school
may cause the distraction to study, but in later like having good
computer
skills are undeniable to any career options.
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