Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is a common phrase: “You only live once.” It indicates the fact that people should care how and with
objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
who
they spend their time. While some people consider routines and stabile
life
without changes better,
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
other
disagree and believe that
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the changes
changes
are positive components of
life
. On the one hand, there are some people who enjoy in normal
life
without adventures and taking opportunities. Those people prefer routines that make their lives organized and mostly the same each day.
Additionally
, those people avoid risks and changes because of fear of losing what they have.
Moreover
, knowing what will come
next
and how they can
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react
reacts
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to
in
the situation makes them feel secure.
Furthermore
, they do not appreciate new challenges, they are satisfied with what they own. What is more, usually they do not get involved in accidents or problems because they tend to avoid any risky situation.
On the other hand
, if
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a person
the person
person
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decides
decide
to change things,
life
can bring them many opportunities. Some people are more enthusiastic and adventurous, so they
without much difficulty
readily
radley
accept new things and changes in their lives. Not only that they gain new
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knowledge, but
knowledge but
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also an amazing experience
also amazing experience
.
Additionally
, changes can give them
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the opportunity
an opportunity
opportunity
to learn more about themselves and others.
For instance
, changing job can bring to person new knowledge, new surrounding and new experience.
Moreover
, with chances in
life
, person can feel fulfilled and satisfied. In conclusion, both statements have advantages. In my opinion, taking chances is better way of living
life
because you never know what can you achieve and gain
a giver or sender
from
form
opportunities.

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