In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

The modern world opens many opportunities for humans. We have more chance to get in touch with contemporary science and
technology
. At the same time, societies
also
respect and appreciate people doing art
such
as artist, musicians and writers. Sciences
are developed
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have developed
a lot, it gives humans knowledge about another planet like Mars, but it cannot give information about human feelings. It does not matter which century we are living, I do believe that arts still have an important role in
humans
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human
humans'
lives. Nowadays, humans are luckier than before because we have more chance to get to know about the new technologies as well as
sciences
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the sciences
. Modern humans could do many things that the ancients could not. To illustrate, contemporary people can easily keep in touch with the universe, and their lives are easier because of the development of
technology
. In the present, scientists are able to create many kinds of robots as well.
However
, sometimes people still feel lost because of the disappearance of arts in modern researches. Unfortunately,
technology
and science are inanimate objects. They do not powerful enough to represent human reactions
such
as excited or disappointed, but
arts
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the arts
do.
For example
, drawings can contain the feelings of the artists or painters, or a book can tell the readers the story of the writer. In fact, from many years, art is like a tool for people to their thinkings and minds to others. Until now, it still works even the development of
life
. In conclusion,
technology
and science give humans huge information about
life
.
However
, they cannot tell you about your feelings and
life
experiences like
arts
any of various long-tailed rodents similar to but larger than a mouse
rats
do. None of us guarantees that we always can explain our reactions smoothly. So
that is
the reason why artists still receive a reception of their works. I do believe that
life
is will be boring if there is no art. So lets arts tell you about your
life
adventure!

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