Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is obvious we all get sick at some point as a human being. But
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
we can see there is a drastic increase of the
number
of people getting sick. Diseases can be categorised
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
two,
where as
on the other hand
whereas
communicable diseases and non- communicable disease. There is a rapid increase in the
number
of patients of non- communicable diseases because of wrong food patterns, busy lives and many
more reasons have
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more reasons to have
led
this
increment. When the
number
of patients is getting
high
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higher
, the need for
health
service
also
rises at the same time. When we look at the world as a
whle
including all components without exception; being one unit or constituting the full amount or extent or duration; complete
whole
, there are developed countries as well as
devloping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
countries. Regardless of the development that the respective country has achieved, there are a
ceratin
definite but not specified or identified
certain
number
of people who cannot afford for their medicine. So I highly agree with providing free
health
services in a country. When it comes to free
health
care, we must understand that everything cannot be given without a charge. There might be circumstances, where the patient has to
bare
have
bear
the cost. But most of the day to day patients are not suffering from dangerous disease, which may cost
high
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higher
. When a person
get
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gets
cought
discover or come upon accidentally, suddenly, or unexpectedly; catch somebody doing something or in a certain state
caught
to flue, sneezing, fever, or sort of
sicknesses
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sickness
, it would be a great help for them if they can get medicine without paying a single penny. One thing that I must highlight is,
evenothough
people do not have enough money to afford
on
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for
expensive private channeling
health
services,
mojority
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the majority
majority
majorities
tend to go because of the
service
they provide. When we look at public
health
services, in most countries it is not
upto
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up to
the standards of private sector services. Less in
cleaneliness
the habit of keeping free of superficial imperfections
cleanliness
, the manner they treat a patient can be seen as rude,
likewise
we can identify so many problems behind the scene. But what we must do is, charging a tax
from
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for
the
genarl
applying to all or most members of a category or group
general
public and have to allocate that whole fund to
maintane
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
the standards of public
health
services. At the same time have to
incease
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
the
number
of public
helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
service
places, and should increase the quality of the
service
too. It is highly agreed that there can be instances where people have to afford for some expensive treatments, but as a whole the respective governments should incorporate to enhance public
health
service
sector.
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