Some people think that the media have to right to publish detail of people’s view, while other thinks it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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While some persons assumed that
media have right
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the media have a right
the media have right
to publish
detail
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details
of their private view other thinks that it should be controlled. In the following paragraphs both views
are discuss
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are discussed
are discussing
.
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First
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The first
and predominant reason is motivation. Media
share
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celebrities those things that are good for
community
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the community
. So that these materials have a great impact on our youngster and
this
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information are helpful for us.
For instance
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publish that points those are related with our nation. There are many NGO’s who always ready
for
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to
help the needy persons
.
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.
They always ready to help for all religions and countries and there
this
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dedication remove the discrimination. If
there
of them or themselves
their
work
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work, share
share
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through
media
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the media, then
the media then
then
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people
now
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
about them and youth will motivate from them that improve the moral values and ethics of the boys and girls.
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Furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
is the main cause of crime.
Mostly
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Most
individuals
share
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their personal life through social media for fame. Sometime its wrong impact on our new generation because
mostly
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most
criminal hack their accounts and stolen their photos and other important documents.
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Therefore they
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Therefore, they
are blackmail
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are blackmailing
have blackmailed
by those criminals and demand for money. When people did not
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their
demands
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demands, then
then
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theft edit their photos and
share
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in different sites that effect on the life of
youngster
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a youngster
. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
ecapulates
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that famous personalities attached with our nations via good thinking. I agree to media have right to
share
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the personal life of specific persons not at all’s and
share
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important and meaningful data of famous persons who should motivate our youth and impact on
nation’s development
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a nation’s development
the nation’s development
in
well
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good
manners.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of Expression
  • Public Interest
  • Misinformation
  • Manipulation
  • Invasion of Privacy
  • Sensitive Information
  • Social Harmony
  • Incite
  • Hatred
  • Accountability
  • Ethical Standards
  • Sensationalism
  • Regulation
  • Unrestricted
  • Public Panic
  • Well-rounded opinion
  • Disseminate
  • Extreme Views
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