Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

It is argued that keeping the surrounding
environment both
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environment, both
at
work
and at home when the things are always placed
at
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in
their own slots is a crucial.
This
essay totally agrees with that statement because behaving in that way helps save time at
work
and keep house clean and safe. When the workplace
been maintained clean
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has been maintained, clean
has been maintained clean
was maintained clean
is being maintained clean
has been maintaining clean
and well organized it takes effect on the trade productivity. Worker always knows where the needed tool is and he will not spend
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
time for finding it.
Also
the tools before being
putted
put into a certain place or abstract location
put
petted
to their places are always
been
the state or fact of existing
being
checked
therefore
they are ready to use at any time.
For example
, in the car
workshops tools
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workshops, tools
workshop tools
workshop workshop tools
such
as screwdrivers and wrenches are always sorted by type and size and mechanics always know where
tools
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the tools
are. Keeping order at home is
also
very important thing because the place where human lives should be clean and safe. Clothes, dishes, supplies, and everything else of household staff must be placed where it should be right after it was used because
otherwise
it will cause disorder and difficulties with finding things or even it could be dangerous if kids will find a knife which would be laying on the desk
instead
of drawer.
For example
, I am once
had
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having
came
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come
too late to the meeting at
work
because I could not find my tie which eventually was found at my wife’s closet. In conclusion, it is crucial to keep order at both
work
and home environment because it makes our life more productive, comfortable and safe.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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