Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

Publishing content on an individual's secret
life
is liberty, has been thought by many people.
On the other hand
, a few understand that it should be managed.
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Are
Is
media a boon or a bane for a person? Both key concepts need to be discussed. It is an undeniable fact that media
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have become
has become
an integral part of society.
Although
it has adverse effects on people's lifestyle when media sources
such
as newspapers, TV, and mobiles have an access to their privacy. If news about family dispute becomes public,
then
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the relationship
relationship
between members
Accept space
,
,
will be affected. Not only quarrel between them increases, but
also
society glue eyes on them.
For example
, husband and wife relation ends up in the court when puts under media scrutiny.
Furthermore
, they may feel
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scared
scare
while going outside. Sometimes they
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ask
are asked
irrelevant questions by media persons which leads to
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a violent situation
violent situations
violent situation
. As a consequence, their private
life
has spoiled.
However
, media becomes boon when it is used with wisdom. If press prints articles and news without involving personal
life
of pupils,
then
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marks it as a
it marks as a
prominent part of society.People, who have
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a habit
habit
the habit
habbit
of reading
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the daily news
daily news
, can broaden their horizon. As they learn about
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a variety
the variety
variety
of
the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
topics
topis
like fashion.
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Beauty
beauty
, health, tourism, science and technology
etcetera
.Essays related to health
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help
helps
them to get rid of problems
that is
obesity, diabetes.
Hence
,
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
it
benefits to people thrive and become extrovert. According to my opinion, it should be used to alleviate the knowledge rather than to discuss about secret disputes and happenings of every individual. In conclusion,
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the media
media
is an imperative source of information. Considering all the grounds, it has
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merit
merits
as well as demerits. Plausible steps should be taken by government to stop media entering into people's
life
.
Submitted by naresh on

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