Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the development rapidly
of
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on
the Internet and Social Media, people around the
world
have achieved many benefits from that
such
as easily accessing any
information
, knowledge and connecting people around the
world
.
However
, it still has some negative sides that we should consider and
use
it wisely.
First
of all, we know that Facebook is the biggest social network in the
world
which has over 1 billion users using regularly. Many people from children to adults like to post, share all their memories, pictures and even their status
into
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in
the social network. It's more fun when adding a
friend
and keep in touch with people around the
world
.
For instance
, my
friend
can easily know what I do and where I travel just simply browsing in a social network.
Nonetheless
, there's still a lot of negative sides effect when sharing our content
such
as daily routine, personal pictures or emotion status on it. People can easily
use
your private
information
to scam others or even you'll be the victim.
For example
, some people
use
your identity to fake and scam money from others. Or they can
use
your private
information
to sell
in
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on
the black market even occupy your account. In general, social media give us many benefits from connecting friends, enjoying happiness with your
friend
at a far distance. But it should be careful about the public any private
information
to the unknown person and ignore any strangers want to add
friend
with you. We should always take care of ourselves in order to avoid the traps.
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