Some people think that using mobile phone and computers has a negative effect on young people 's reading and writing skills .to what extended do you agree or disagree?

While using devices for reading and writing are
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influencing
young
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person's
life
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It has some pragmatic
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issue, however
however
some uncooperative issue. I would discuss both view in following paragraph.
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, gadgets have some positive sides. These
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devices
are convenient because it is less time consuming and result provider
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easy
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Moreover everyone
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Moreover, everyone
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send
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messages
one country to another in
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a few minutes
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Written
process
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takes
long time
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Through digital media one print can be sent to thousand people easily which is helpful for everyone
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little
negative effect on
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teenagers
a teenager
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youth
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uses
only technology gadgets for study and
writing
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writing, then
then
they destroy their basic education skill
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it
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reduces
the value of handwriting as well as creativity.
In
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addition, these
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appliances
are feeling less and it does not express the human emotion.
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describe
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describes
person feelings by
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the smiley
a smiley
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is not part of formal pattern of writing
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Furthermore
this
media have keyboard checker which
correct
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corrects
the wrong spelling and correct them it is adverse for students
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They
do not learn correct word when they
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are given
have given
gave
exam or any written task
then
they face difficulties
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The
last
but not thing is that technology gadgets are
expensive some people
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expensive, some people
can not
can not
cannot
afford. In the conclusion modern devices have some positive and negative aspect in equal measures. Toady technology is
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important, however
however
basic skill is
also
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