some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning countrie's culture and experience while others believe it is better to travelling with someone you know.Discuss both views and share your opinion.

It is often argued among individuals that travelling by along is more beneficial for getting knowledge about
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the culture
culture
and experience of
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a country
the country
country
.
However
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,
,
any of various alternatives; some other
another
other
school of people
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is
are
in favour of travelling with
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a known person
known
person
.I agree with
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the latter view
latter view
.I will elucidate
firstly
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,
,
how
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alone, travelling
alone travelling
make more confident and
secondly
, why travelling with
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friends
a friend
friend
is beneficial. To commence with
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,
,
without any shade of doubt travel
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
countries are being hobbies of people because they can get new experience as well as knowledge of culture There are some reasons why people prefer to travel alone.
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Firstly
Firsly
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,
,
it makes more confident.To put it
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simply
simple
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,
,
when people are travelling by
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themselves, they
themselves they
theirselves they
have to handle all
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situations
situation
in their own way because there will no one available to help.
Therefore
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,
,
they become more confident.
Furthermore
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,
,
they can get experience by making new friends while communicating with others.
Additionally
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,
,
they will feel
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comfortable
comfort
and free from any kind of tension of someone else.
Moreover
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,
,
they could
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not face
not face face
any issue over there by travelling alone.
Nevertheless
,
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there are copious
there are copious of
reasons why companion is important while
journey
. The prominent is
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,
,
it
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does
makes
not only
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easier, but
easier but
easy but
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a safer journey
safer
journey
also
.In
also
mole words
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,
,
if any traveller lost in strange place
then
another
person
help to find a way back
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to
of
their destination.
Furthermore
, in any case if
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a person
the person
person
is travelling in
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the car, then
the car then
a car then
car
then
it will easy to change each other to drive when another is spent off.What is more
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,
,
alone one never enjoy the trip because they could not express the feelings with strangers.
Thus
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,
,
two people can share all the expense with each other and
also
they can take care of each other which make them happy and comfortable during
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the journey
a journey
journey
. To conclude, above all the views are evidence that both ways of travelling has their own advantages.
Although
alone travellers can feel more confident yet
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,
,
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the company
company
of
any of various alternatives; some other
another
other
person
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makes
make
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the easy and safe journey
an easy and safe journey
easy and safe
journey
.In my perspective, travelling with known pension is more beneficial rather than being alone.

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