some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning countrie's culture and experience while others believe it is better to travelling with someone you know.Discuss both views and share your opinion.
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countries are being hobbies of people because they can get new experience as well as knowledge of culture There are some reasons why people prefer to travel alone.not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
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the person
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the car, then
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.In my perspective, travelling with known pension is more beneficial rather than being alone.Submitted by princestyle47 on
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