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some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning countrie's culture and experience while others believe it is better to travelling with someone you know.Discuss both views and share your opinion.

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It is often argued among individuals that travelling by along is more beneficial for getting knowledge about
culture
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the culture
 and experience of
country
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a country
the country
.
However
,
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,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 school of people
are
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is
 in favour of travelling with
known
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a known person
person
.I agree with
latter view
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the latter view
.I will elucidate
firstly
,
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,
how
alone travelling
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alone, travelling
 make more confident and
secondly
, why travelling with
friend
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friends
a friend
 is beneficial. To commence with
,
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,
without any shade of doubt travel
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries are being hobbies of people because they can get new experience as well as knowledge of culture There are some reasons why people prefer to travel alone.
Firsly
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Firstly
,
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,
it makes more confident.To put it
simple
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simply
,
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,
when people are travelling by
theirselves they
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themselves, they
themselves they
 have to handle all
situation
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situations
 in their own way because there will no one available to help.
Therefore
,
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,
they become more confident.
Furthermore
,
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,
they can get experience by making new friends while communicating with others.
Additionally
,
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,
they will feel
comfort
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comfortable
 and free from any kind of tension of someone else.
Moreover
,
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,
they could
not face face
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not face
 any issue over there by travelling alone.
Nevertheless
,
there are copious of
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there are copious
 reasons why companion is important while
journey
. The prominent is
,
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,
it
makes
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
 not only
easy but
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easier, but
easier but
safer
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a safer journey
journey
also
.In
also
 mole words
,
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,
if any traveller lost in strange place
then
 another
person
 help to find a way back
of
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to
 their destination.
Furthermore
, in any case if
person
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a person
the person
 is travelling in
car
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the car, then
the car then
a car then
then
 it will easy to change each other to drive when another is spent off.What is more
,
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,
alone one never enjoy the trip because they could not express the feelings with strangers.
Thus
,
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,
two people can share all the expense with each other and
also
 they can take care of each other which make them happy and comfortable during
journey
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the journey
a journey
. To conclude, above all the views are evidence that both ways of travelling has their own advantages.
Although
 alone travellers can feel more confident yet
,
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,
company
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the company
 of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
make
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makes
easy and safe
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the easy and safe journey
an easy and safe journey
journey
.In my perspective, travelling with known pension is more beneficial rather than being alone.
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