Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Advertising can be defined as the ways of communicating the users of a particular product or a
servicve
work done by one person or group that benefits another
service
. It is paid by the party who wants to sell or influence the crowd to buy the said item. Ads are becoming
popular tool
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popular tools
a popular tool
of marketing
day
by
day
. Television channels,
news papers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
,
raiod
FMs, social media and many more things have become the platform for
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
.
Eventhough
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Even though
some
says
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say
that
this
may influence people's mindset, it depends on the person's need and the ability to
affor
make available or accessible, provide or furnish
offer
afford
for them. For an
exaplme if
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example, if
example if
you see a company promoting a chair that can be
fold
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folded
and used as a bed, still if you do not have a need of it, you will not buy it.
Likewise
, everything we see may not help our lives to become
more easier
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easier
.
In contrast
,
this
process supports us to get to know about different types of products and services. There are plenty of things that we did not know about, till we see them through an
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
.
This
may
changes
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change
have changed
our lives and make it improve by giving new solutions for our
day
to
day
problems. The things we saw as an
issues
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issue
may not be a burden anymore, after a solution identified by a company.
Also
, these new inventions have a big chance of saving our time. Everyone today is running an ongoing race, and all are busy with hundred of things.
Becasue
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Because
of that, both men and women
tries
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try
to find out something which makes our lives easier and at saves time. Advertising will inform us about new
eqipments
an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service
equipment
which will make our lives more comfortable with saving time.
Therefore
, in
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
must say that even though ads influence people up to a certain extent, it helps us to become more successful with our
day
today
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to day
activities.
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