Some people say that zoos should be banned for being cruel towards the animals while others say they should be continued for protecting rare animals. Discuss both your views and give your opinion.

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While some believe that zoos must be prohibited

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from

treating animals insensitively,

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, others favour to retain them for

wild

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

life

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conservation

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I personally believe that rare animals can only be saved from extinction when kept in zoos away from

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the effects

of unfavourable conditions. On the one hand, proponents of cruelty free practices towards

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all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

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believe that keeping

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forests

creatures in congested areas

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are

harsh.

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, Elephants cannot survive comfortably in small enclosures

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Zoos may not perfectly replicate natural conditions suitable for animal wellbeing

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as adequate space for their free movement.

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, these animals would not have suitable circumstances similar to their habitat. Resultantly, many rare species could die sooner than their natural

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life-span

the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)

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, in artificial habitats.

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, zoo supporters insist on utility of

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sanctuaries for conservation. They argue that a zoo serves as a shelter for shielding animals

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as polar bears

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from bitter and abruptly changing climatic conditions.

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, deforestation as a legacy of increasing human population leads to disappearing natural habitats for wild animals

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connection, carefully planned conservation programs would provide

suitable environment

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a suitable environment

, temperature, food, and health care which may enable animals to live healthy and grow in numbers. Australian Zoological research journal recently reported that giant pandas are increasing in numbers after successful intervention of human-controlled breeding for their reproduction.

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, conserving animals in zoos in one of the best ways to save species from extinction. In conclusion,

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some people think that zoos should be forbidden, I

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, believe that they are worthwhile to save endangered species from extinction.

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, zoo authorities should carefully regulate the procedures for animal care, so that

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sanctuaries can truly serve the purpose of animal protection.

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Topic Vocabulary:

animal welfare
conservation
captive breeding
habitat
ethical issues
zoochosis
endangered species
genetic diversity
reintroduction programs
wildlife education
sanctuary
natural living conditions
artificial environments
behavioral enrichment
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