Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Modern

technology

is flourishing by leaps and bounds, which brings significant efforts

in

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our daily communications. As

the

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time passed by,

communication

through

letters

has been reduced because of vast

improvement

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improvements

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in telecommunications. I agree with the given statement and the reasons are demystified below.

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with, in

present

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the present

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era

technology

plays a vital role in everyone’s life. As it is escalated to the distance between the people is reduced.

Consequently

, the mode of

communication

with human beings has changed dramatically. Through new advancements of imparting

platform

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platforms

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such

as email, WhatsApp and Facebook, the

information

can be sent in

short

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a short

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span of time across the world but

this

was not the case when

letters

were used.

For Instance

, in

early

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the early

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1990’s

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, my father used to send

letters

to share

information

and it used to take 4 to 5 days to reach the destination, but now my father is using

the

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email and other social media applications

instead

of

letters

for faster transmission.

Furthermore

, modern

communication

provides various ways to connect with dear ones, who are staying far away using text and voice messages, voice calls and video calls.

As a result

, people can feel their loved one’s presence around them.

Nevertheless

,

letters

do not have the facility to feel the presence except to convey the

information

. Resultantly, the usage of

letters

will demolish as

the

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modern

technology

is taking flight. To recapitulate,

the

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modern

technology

is driving the world and making humans

to

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have better and faster

communication

platform

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platforms

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to send

information

within a short period of time.